3. From the feedback, I decided to change the script to fit my altered product such as the price and that it can be purchased in the app store. I also tried to speak up and sound more excited since people commented on that last time.
Wednesday, March 16, 2016
Elevator Pitch No. 3
1. The pitch video
2. After reading all of the feedback from my last pitch, I was surprised to read that some people did not think I was excited about the product. I think that was silly because I am very passionate about this issue as well as the product I came up with.
3. From the feedback, I decided to change the script to fit my altered product such as the price and that it can be purchased in the app store. I also tried to speak up and sound more excited since people commented on that last time.
3. From the feedback, I decided to change the script to fit my altered product such as the price and that it can be purchased in the app store. I also tried to speak up and sound more excited since people commented on that last time.
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Hi Gabie!
ReplyDeleteI think you have a really good product that would be extremely useful, as texting and driving is a serious issue! I like that you modified your script to sound more enthusiastic about your product and I think it was a good idea to include the price in the app store as part of your pitch. I would recommend trying to focus your eye contact at the camera the next time around. Still a great pitch!
Check out my blog post if you want!
http://lilliegilmoreent3003.blogspot.com/2016/03/elevator-pitch-no-3.html
Gabie, I think you are contenting to add on to a good idea. Like I have said before I feel that preventing texting and driving would save countless lives. I think you presented the information clearly as well. Definitely a great pitch and you should keep growing this idea. If you would like to check out my pitch and how I presented it here is the link: http://scottysscene.blogspot.com/2016/03/elevator-pitch-no-3.html
ReplyDeleteHi Gabie! I really enjoyed watching your elevator pitch. You clearly have done a good job polishing it over the multiple assignments. I also thought your idea was very strong, and you sounded quite enthusiastic about it. I'd appreciate it if you checked out my blog post on the same subject! http://jlopez3003.blogspot.com/2016/03/elevator-pitch-no-3.html
ReplyDeleteHi Gabie,
ReplyDeleteI really like your elevator pitch.I like that you have your goals stablished and you really know the feedback.What I like the most about your pitch if that you have confidence and personality.This skills are very important you want to be an entrepreneur in a future and I have a feeling you will be some day.This is the link to my blog http://ndajbura.blogspot.com/2016/03/elevator-pitch-no-3.html